Thread:Reciter5613/@comment-24200891-20171219061615/@comment-24200891-20181125183438

In my Twin Birth Rita choosed names for the twins alone. Her husband complained that she didn't consult names it with him. He wasn't in hospital and she was under time pressure. With which parent would you side there?

During writing the fanfic I wasn't sure about some of scenes. For example originally Lana was tickling Luna not by touching her feet, but by licking them, but I changed it, because I considered it too weird. I wasn't sure about Leni feeding Lana like bird feeding hatchling, becuase it also was weird. It was supposed to fit Leni's ditziness and imply that's one of reasons Lana likes gross food. I considered Lynn and Lincoln fighting in mud as Lana's inspiration to do this, but then I thought it's too strange.