Thread:Reciter5613/@comment-24200891-20171219061615/@comment-24200891-20181221045502

I noticed some mistakes, but I have no idea for any addition to the story.

"Logan then out of fear automatically push the bully away from him." should be reworded to "Then out of fear Logan automatically pushed the bully away from him."

His hug was so tight it made hr face red and she couldn't breath. -> His hug was so tight that it made her face red and she couldn't breath.