Thread:Mesektet/@comment-2143738-20150319223330/@comment-3581997-20150320010407

It's ok if it says the same basic thing. But don't just slip the order around.

Original article to reference

"Pac-Man is the titualr character of Pac-Man. The 8-bit character has ben part of gaming for years. Pac-Man saves the land by devoruing ghosts",

Good copy: "Pac-Man is the title character of Pac-Man videogames. He has been an 8-bit character in gaming for years. He has the ability to eat ghosts."

Bad copy: "Pac-Man saves the land by devoruing ghosts. Pac-Man is the titualr character of Pac-Man. The 8-bit character has ben part of gaming for years."