Thread:Reciter5613/@comment-24200891-20171219061615/@comment-24200891-20171230103438

3 months ago I wrote fanfic about Lincoln becoming a teenager, but now I feel the story needs many, many, many changes. I began noticing suplots of Leni's, Luna's and Lynn's were not needed and the story is too slow and too long. What else do you think should be changed there? http://theloudhouse.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:FirstDrellSpectre/Fanfiction_-_One_of_the_Teens

I plan to make picture of young Leni with baby Lynn and baby Linky. Do you think 5-year old girl would be able to hold both 2 babies?