Thread:Mesektet/@comment-27729149-20140628032251/@comment-3581997-20140701023402

Ok well I have read the article and made my mind, but before I go into that I want to site a good example of how to judge these sorts of things.

There are two game series, one is called the Elder Scrolls and the other is called Saints' Row. In Elder Scrolls you can side with a group of very pleasant assassins called the Dark Brotherhood as your allies, In Saints' Row one of your more consummate friends is a murdering sadist named Jonny Gat. I would consider Johnny to be hero material but the Dark Brotherhood not, why? Johnny helps you fight several villains, liberate/avenge allies and is the main character's friend who has saved his/her life repeatedly, the Dark Brotherhood kill people. Oh they are your friends and really pleasant and even honorable but they commit no heroic deeds, and they are helping you so you can continue to murder people with them, that's it. Even folks like Eric Cartman contribute to solving a problem and doing good, even if they are also frequently villains, that is the heart of the role of a Protagonist; "Do they resolve the story's conflict?"

Now that being said- 1. The article paints a picture of his background and friendship with our hero but gives no heroic deeds or roles, either ethically or just in the story structure.

2; and this is the important one, it is plagiarism, it links to Grand Theft Auto wiki. This can be allowed if it is copied by the original author from their wiki to this, but that is not the case here.

I will still give it until the 6th to be rewritten or added to but as is there is not enough information to support the claim of hero and is a copy from some place else anyway... If after it is deleted you want to recreate it your are welcome to have a crack at showing Trevor in a heroic light, but what is there now, can't stay.