Thread:Mesektet/@comment-27729149-20160128170019/@comment-3581997-20160414192705

I assume you mean to show troubles without victimizing. Largely it can work if those troubles are shown to happen incidently. If the universe appears to be bending over backwords to torment him, the work can come off contrived, however if they could happen to anyone and Mickael just happens to be in the wrong place at the wrong time, or becomes the subject of them due to his own motivations, it can be much more critically forgiving.