Thread:Mediawatcher/@comment-4708882-20160426013645/@comment-24469175-20170418040137

I know I shouldn't just focus on monsters, that's beyond idiotic if I want to tell a good story, but I would like to tell you about a new character I came up with.

Her name is Alissa ronin, shes the girlfriend of a mafia leader(who I am also going to give more emphasis on later on) and the second in command, in case your wondering the mafia is responsible for many robberies and killing numerous cops in the past and would commit arson on a daily basis hoping to build up fear and respect from his enemies, even going as far to abuse his son, allowing his own goons to beat up and humiliate him for no reason other than sick sadism, so how could Alissa stand out from him and especially the high standard set by the others? Well here goes nothing, as much of a piece of shit the leader is, he has genuine loyalty towards his fellow members and was even saddened when his son left him which in turn made him be missed by the man who hurt him horribly.

Alissa does things that the leader would never do, she takes numerous hostages and tortures them in beyond horrific matters, that includes mutilation and mind rape to a disturbing degree turning them into mindless apes who can't even say a sentence straight. In some cases she even forces them to have sex with each other to amuse herself and then leave them to starve until they beg her to let them out, setting up a hope spot just to take away there happiness once again. She has an affair with one of the gang members showing that she has no loyalty towards her husband/first in command. When first confronted by micheal, she tells him that she is going to go after his nephew next and turn him into a mindless slave as well and if he doesn't behave she'll feed him to the dogs, in fact it's even hinted that she has done this to others before, the only reason she hasn't gone widespread is because she doesn't the resources that Roger Murdock has, so she keeps her victims to a minimal. She gets beaten down by micheal and then is left be eaten by her own dogs that she's used to kill others, ending her.

What do you think?