Thread:Reciter5613/@comment-24200891-20171219061615/@comment-24200891-20180228074244

Actually Lori moved out before the fanfic began, but I just didn't focus on this. It was hard to write Lincoln dealing with changes like becoming angrier, more violent, more gluttonous, more insecure, more prevy than he's in the original show. After time passed I feel I wasted the potential of the story.

I didn't notice you took inspiration from my picture. Thanks.

In Lynner takes all I hoped Lynn learns to be humble, but she only learned to not show her big ego. Because of this I consider my fanfic "Competing sisters, helpful brother" as an old shame. Funny is that I considered my "April Two Rules" as a shame, because in "Fool's paradise" Luan didn't learn to not be a jerk, but when "Fool Me Twice" used plot similar to my fanfic, then I no longer consider it as a shame. What a zig-zaged irony.