Thread:Reciter5613/@comment-24200891-20171219061615

I read your Lisa's birth and I like it so far. I would not know how to write her birth story, because I didn't have idea for her smartness other than genetic mutations. My favorite scene is Leni teaching Lisa to walk.

I had troubles with writing baby Lucy, because in the show she's emotionless and aloof. I wrote her as a baby with typical baby personality, because I considered emotionless baby would be creepy. I don't believe she was nihilistic since birth, I theorize someone close to her died and it was traumatic for her, I guess Harriet. Besides Lucy's birth is a cute story with Lucy interacting like a standard baby.

Your fanfic motivated me to write Twin Birth, I'll write it on DArt when I have plot ready. You wish to write your version of Lincoln's Birth, you can try, but you need a different name, so nobody would confuse our fanfics. How about "Lincoln is Born"? 