Thread:Mesektet/@comment-3581997-20160615160106/@comment-24469175-20160726125406

By the way, I'm sure you remember lucid from villains wiki, well he was nice enough to do me a solid and do a rewrite with my monsters:


 * Roger Murdock is the Big Bad and the one responsible for most of the setting's misery. Roger puts up a public facade as a well-meaning figure and is seen as the town's savior. Covertly, however, Roger is responsible for kidnapping countless innocents and turning them into broken, homicidal madmen through torture and brainwashing, letting them loose to commit every crime under the book before having them detained for the sake of his positive publicity. Roger's worst act was seizing a cure-all of various types of cancer from a doctor named Max and then poisoning it before its global shipment, leading to the death of over ten million people worldwide. Roger pins everything on Max and has him arrested, solely to make himself look better. A delusional narcissist without a shred of empathy for others, Roger is responsible for perpetuating a cycle of misery and ruining hundreds of lives purely to soak in his own dreams of heroic glory.


 * Paul Trevors is a cannibalistic spree-killer responsible for a trove of disappearances throughout the town. Driven out of the town alongside his family, Paul began to trap and hunt animals to feed himself. Mastering that, Paul moves up to trapping innocents - including children - hanging them on hooks and butchering them to use their flesh to feed him and his family. Paul's only reason for keeping his family alive is to fatten them up and eventually kill and eat them too; even when Michael offers an alternative way for Paul to survive, Paul denies him and gleefully states he's doing what he does to "lower the population."


 * Lloyd Trevors, Paul's equally depraved nephew, is a swaggering bully already guilty of petty theft and assault on other students. He hits his stride when he acquires possession of a series of cyanide pills. Testing them out on his parents and watching them die, Lloyd decides to indulge himself by randomly poisoning several people around his school and the general area, leading to the deaths of dozens of his fellow students - children included. Lloyd is also responsible for raping his own sister for nothing more than a sick laugh. Despite his age, Lloyd was a domineering sociopath no less depraved than the adult criminals of his town.


 * The unnamed twins are a pair of serial killer-rapists with a body count explicitly stated to be in the hundreds. During their onscreen time, the twins crash a school bus into a hospital and proceed to take a family hostage, murdering the father and interrogating the mother by threatening the life of her infant child. After the woman discloses the information they wanted, the twins proceed to murder the baby anyways and rape her.


 * Joan Cassidy is an obsessive, unhinged pyromaniac with a love of rape and fire. Joan came upon her Start Of Darkness after she was sexually abused herself; however, after burning those who assaulted her to death in an incinerator, Joan came to love the feeling of power it gave her, and quickly became known as a psychopath responsible for raping, murdering, and burning her victims to death to sate herself. Joan is also a consummate misandrist who sexually tortures men out of a belief every man wants nothing but perpetual sexual desire, using this as an excuse to dominate them. Joan also has two kids gas-bomb an entire neighborhood. Joan, even in spite of her Freudian Excuse, is ultimately a sadist who only uses her experiences as an excuse to empower herself over others, and even Michael - who had a notably similar backstory to hers - cannot sympathize with her.


 * Kimberly is an amicable surgeon hiding a dark secret. In actuality a homicidal monster who murdered her own family, Kimberly uses her profession to tortuously kill her kidnapped victims, then scavenging their organs and selling them to other hospitals both to profit herself and to keep her public image up.

What do you think?