Thread:Reciter5613/@comment-24200891-20171219061615/@comment-24200891-20181030122745

Fowl Play sounded more creative. Another disappointing change to me was Relative Chaos into The Loudest Mission: Relative Chaos, because it was needlessly too long. It's not Japanese anime to have ridiculously long titles I didn't mind changes of Tripped! and Ticked!, because titles were still fitting. Lesson Plan changed into Middle Men was a good decision, because title is more suitable.

When I was writing Twin Birth I stopped caring what's predictible and what's not. It was supposed to be a sweet baby story, so complex plot was not needed. I had biggest problem with avoiding similarities to previous birth stories. I considered Lana tickling Luna by licking her feet, but that just started to sound too awkward to me. I tried to make epilogue longer by writing scenes of Lana and Lola no longer liking the same until Lincoln takes them to watch Blarney the Dinosaur, but I wanted to be over with writing this after 10 months. Hard to blame, right?